With the coming of Christmas holiday, I have a two week holiday. 求检查语法错误

【专家解说】：I have a two-week holiday.而且HOLIDAY与前文重复。或者可以写成vacation.如果你不是专业英语，要求很高的话，holiday与vacation可以通用 decided--decide还没到来所以现在时 stay at home and memorize words---我感觉应该改成I decide to stay at home to memorize words. all the day-------all day I will go to church----I will go to the church名词前面要有冠词。 celebrate the Christmas day---- Christmas 这个节日不能有DAY。 圣诞快乐Merry Christmas 而不是Merry Christmas Day with people in church 重复 多此一举 It will have a lot of fun太平淡。可以转换句式为I think it will be fantastic 我感觉全文可以改成: With the coming of Christmas, I have a two-week holiday. I really expect to it. I decide to stay at home to memorize words. But I won't stay at home all day. Because I will go to the church and celebrate the Christmas with the people. I think it will be fantastic. 望采纳。